WoW, i really thought that ur poem was excellent. the way u used ur words in the poem made it seem better, hardly any mistakes in it. I give ur poem a 5/5

Wonderful poem. A lot of emotion was put into it. And the structure was excellent. Good job 5/5

It has a lot of emotion, and it's really amazing definetely5/5
luv gabriella

Aww this one was really cute, definitely more original. good job good write, great flow and wording. 5/5

Very good poem! it sounded more like a song to me as I read it. You did such a wonderful job! keep up the great work. 5/5

Awww wow Bri!! that was beautiful! i loved how you wrote it out aswel! great job!!! my favourite stanza was

Noticing; it's not only fairy tales or made up stories.
Wishes, fantasies, prayers, & dreams really do come true.
The man that has always accompanied me in my dreams,
I've come to find, that man was you.

it just ended the piece beautifully! thx for your advice on my poem too, I will defiantely take it lol
5/5 from me hun!!

xoxo Lucy

5/5 that was amazing. soo well done i love it. i loved the last stanza.. been there at one point in time =] good job!

An amazing poem yet again. I really liekd teh repition of the title, "..... (Don't move on) ....." between each stanza. I think this really extended the point your were tryign to make. The end concluded the poem wonderfully. It was a really really sweet poem, and the emotion was wonderfully displayed. the rhyming was good, as was the rhythem of the poem. Keep writing , you have lots of talent! xx

Beautiful..just wow! I can't tell you that was just an amazing poem! Keep up the great work! You're an amazing writer. God Bless 5/5
<3Tayyy

I really like the way it was writen and i thought i was definatly one of your best poems, it really made me think and yea, another great great great poem by you for me to read

I really liked this.
Your wording and the way your wrote this added a different level emotion to the overall peice.
Great job!
5/5

XxAmberxX

Very articulate and well structured piece, quite astonishing talent and maturity for one so young in years!
Well done!

Neil.