Another good write, the imagery is great and the poemhas stronge emotion, keep at it, your a great poet.

I liked this. It was about dying yes, but less obvious.
The blunt and subtle approach really paid off.
The icy heart image was very powerful, though I enjoyed all of the poem.
Just a little suggestion...I think you could get away with dropping "because" from the second line and "eventually" from the third. Just add a comma if you want to preserve the slow digression.
Thanks for sharing.

Oh and I've run out of time I'm afraid, but I'll be back after work to critique the rest.

Wonderful write! It is hard to win me over in such a short piece... they really are difficult to pull off, but you have done so flawlessly. Your word choice was needless to say: interesting and intriguing. A short piece, while intricate and strong. A nicely captured moment, I enjoyed it!

Peace, Joe