Stupid you

by tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup   Mar 5, 2007


I feel so abused,
So tattered and torn.
My heart is in the floor,
Bloody and bruised.

My life is in your hands,
So shook up.
My soul rests in peace with yours,
Shaken and ragged.

I feel so alone,
So battered and frayed.
My mind is in shambles,
Broken down,

My love was all yours,
Pure and true.
Till you walked through that door,
Stupid you.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    Whoa... loved the ending :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Kristina

    Aww sad poem but very well written. i really like it a lot. and i can relate to the words you wrote. amazing job. 5/5

    ~Kristina

  • 17 years ago

    by LithiumSacrifice

    I really liked this poem. 5/5 its very simple and direct.. good job. =]

  • 17 years ago

    by Poetic Justice

    I like this poem for one reason actually there is a lot of reasons but I'll name one. The emotion it gives off is very deep and sad. i love IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Hes the one who holds me tight

    I liked the way you wrote this it was very good. 5/5 ill keep reading more of urs.

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