Comments : Unaware of our glances.

  • 17 years ago

    by firexdancer

    This is totally confusing, but it has perfect flow, and even if you can't really understand it, it is really gorgeous
    luv gabriella

  • 17 years ago

    by NashvilleBlues

    It's a great poem, but i'm a bit unclear as to the meaning of it....would you mind letting me know? thanks! keep writing!

  • 17 years ago

    by Annabel

    Okay .. we were in the lunch hall at school .. there's two teachers who've split up cos the man had an affair with the drama receptionist. The drama receptionist is first to enter .. then our crazy music teacher, the man that is.. and all the time me and my friends are watching from the other side of the hall. This is a faithful narrative of what we saw tbh..

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni

    Wonderful poem once again! you are such a great writer at free verse poetry! keep up the great work, I cannot wait to read more of your poetry!