Your Meaning

by Gasttlee   Mar 5, 2007


What is your purpose?
Even I don't know this
for only you will notice.

We all live for a reason
with our own season.

We always give our best
despite whatever test.

We strive for genuine results
to show our own occults.

You have loads to achieve
beyond that you believe.

We all have dreams
that spread like streams.

Everyone has an aim
only theirs to claim.

We take our own courses
charging like horses
using different sources
like riding in racecourses.

Don't end life so fast
for you are a mark that will truly last
despite all in your past.

What is your purpose?
As I said, only you'll know this.

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  • 14 years ago

    by AngelicDecadence

    Okay. I'm sorry. I just simply can't take these apart because it's really hard to read this. I mean, I understand it. It's just the rhyme's were REALLY forced, and I mean each one. when every line rhymes like that its overwhelming for the reader. Also, when you have 3 lines, then 2 for the rest of the poem, then randomly add in 4, it doesn't suit the flow well. I would try not to do that if I were you, otherwise.. it was ok.

  • 16 years ago

    by Christina

    I didnt like this poem very much im srry but it seemed way to forced with the rhyming!

    <3 i love you silly

  • 16 years ago

    by pookiengurgi

    Wonderfully written,you have really awesome work..keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Awesome poem i really liked it, i can tell you have an amazing talent. Keep it up and thank you so much for the comment they really make my day. Thank Shanik

  • 17 years ago

    by Fredy

    Well, like the other one, this one is really good

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