Comments : I owe you anyway

  • 17 years ago

    by Static

    Sad but sweet. Dave its not my business but its easy to see you 2 have love. Stop overthinking it! Try and not wait for her, cos she is waiting on u :P I no u 2 will stay together foreva...James

  • 17 years ago

    by supaflyhonkyguy

    Man this poems a roller coaster ride. to be honest when i saw four line stanzas followed by 3 line stanzas i was expecting to hear a choppy sounding poem but man does it flow nicely. great emotion impact for the read and entertaining to read. thanks

  • 17 years ago

    by Kristina

    This is really sad. i liked the emotion in it very much! the flow was pretty good! keep it up! 5/5

    ~Kristina

  • 17 years ago

    by Kalee

    This is a great poem. it is sad and beautiful with lots of emotion. I hope it all works out for you in the end.
    5/5

    Kalee

  • 17 years ago

    by jason

    Its good 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup

    This poem is absolutelyl beautiful love the way you expressed your feelings and emotions. i just think your great!!

  • 17 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    I really liked the emotion expressed in this. Some of the imagery created was really vivid, too. Keep it up.

  • 17 years ago

    by blue eyes

    This is a beautiful poem, and I don't think there are even words to tell or explain how it makes people think and feel when they read it. Love is a part of life and it will always be taken and not given back. But the key is to keep loving and never stop.

  • 17 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Thats an excellent poem, keep writing. take kare x x x

  • 17 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Thats an excellent poem, keep writing. take kare x x x

  • 17 years ago

    by Idiosyncratic

    Wow... this is forcefully sad. Definitely makes the reader think.

    Nice word choice and rhythm, though the flow is a bit off in some places.

    Still, I really enjoyed reading this poem so 5/5.

  • 17 years ago

    by Just Lucy

    GREAT FLOW!! awesome flow man!! i loved it, you really have the emotion behind you 100% in your poems! i loved it man, another 5/5 from me!

    xoxo Lucy

  • 17 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    You seem to have a heartbreak theme in all the poems I had read.
    remember that there are other topics to write on but also remember that what comes from the heart is what makes a great poem. So that would be why you have a lot of heartbreak poems I assume
    4.5

  • 17 years ago

    by xPerfect Chaosx

    Wow... this poem is soooo gut wrenchingly emotinal.. made me tear up a bit.. probably because I could relate to it so well... The poem in itself flows wonderfully, and the wording as superb as usual, but the message behind this, of such terrible sadness, it's overwhelming.. a great poem 5/5 as usual!!
    Much Love,
    .:Danielle:.

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Awwwww, such a touching poem!
    I love all off your poems, David, you are so talented. You really are!

    Take care, my sweet

    xxIngridxxx