This Freak

by becca   Mar 6, 2007


Alone in her bedroom,
She sits on the floor,
Where she's uninterupted,
With the lock on the door.
Alone in her hurting,
Alone in her pain,
As their torturing words,
Haunt her thoughts once again.
Their constant sneering,
The words that they speak,
That name her a loony,
An outcast, a freak.
But this freak is a person,
This freak's got a heart,
This freak's got a soul,
That you're tearing apart.
This freak's got two wrists,
You've stained crimson red,
This freak's been scarred deep,
By those things that you said.
So alone in her bedroom,
She sits on the floor,
With the razor in one hand,
And the lock on door.
Driven to madness,
Feeling broken and numb,
This freak couldn't take it,
Now look what you've done.

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  • 15 years ago

    by killcupidxoxo

    That has an awsome flow and really spoke to me. i used to be bullied really badly and can relate. hope that this isnt true for you. to anyone who bullies people, plz read this annd if u av a heart u will stop and listen. your words are only words to you, but they are destroying someone else.

  • 16 years ago

    by TotaMariee

    Beautiful
    absolutly beautiful
    and i can 100% relate

    i love it!!!

    xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by MaSkEdSoUl

    Great...no EXCELLENT poem. Like everyone said it really draws you in and makes you feel as if you were right there when it happened. Very well written with a great flow. Keep writing!!! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by smithy

    Ths is awesm. u jst mde it 2 my faves gal! ur wrds r so powerful nd deep. u rly no how 2 tuch people!

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Terribly sad.
    The emotion was pouring through and this poem hit me hard. The word "freak" in my mind seems so evil....probably because I hear it often. Anyway, wonderful poem. 5/5 Keep writing.

    Stephanie Lynn .+.

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