Secret Garden

by Aken Sol   Mar 6, 2007


I sometimes like to take walks at night
In a garden secret from all but me
It illuminates under the stars and moonlight
A feast for the sights, a eyeful to see

The flowers that bloomed in the dark
Intoxicate me with their fragrance
As I take my steps inside the mystic park
I feel time losing its importance

Pacing under the star-spilled sky
I brush past sweet orchids that glow
Lost in the beauty, I reach a new high
Mesmerized in this peaceful flow

But when I think of the joy you bring
Or of your beauty that shines so true
Then this garden, you know, means not a thing
Nothing, if I compared it to you

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  • 14 years ago

    by PassingAngel

    Very sweet :)

    -PA

  • 15 years ago

    by xX the left behind Xx

    Awesome poem..
    and i liked the twist at the end..about u comparing the garden to the girl..and she being much better..
    keep it up. :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    That is a sweet poem...i liked it a lot...the flow was great and i liked the format...it is not to long and it is not to short...it is just right...i loved the word that you used as well...5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Troubled Dreams

    I liked this. Very good. great expressions.

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    You describe this garden so well...I can almost smell the flowers!
    Very beautiful poem by you.

    Keep writing,

    5/5 Ingrid