Comments : My Forgotten Fairy Tale

  • 17 years ago

    by Hurtingsoul

    I shall sit here, without wail
    Thinking, hoping, praying, wondering
    About my forgotten fairy tale

    my favorite lines in the whole poem were these great job
    Take Care
    xoHSxo

  • 17 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Mm i like this. i dont know what to say about this poem. but i like the connection. the poems good. 5/5.

  • 17 years ago

    by skyfox

    This is a very clever poem. I love the way it is constructed and the flow. Like others who commented I found the imagery quite powerful. Exceptional poem!

  • 17 years ago

    by in.need.of.a.lucky.charm

    Aww this was so sad. it was so well written though! i wish there was a fairy god mother out there for all of us. well done babe,
    Much Love And Many Kisses, Bex.

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Wow, reading this i do agree, you made me think, this life is basecly a movie nothing else. it will end no matter a happy end or a sad end, all it matter is it does end one day. nice word and nice poem, i really enjoyed reading it, specially the word MOVIE where you took me to a different world of thinking.

  • 17 years ago

    by Romancing the Darker Side

    I love the rhyming you usd in the poem, and I love the comparison.

  • 16 years ago

    by Romancing the Darker Side

    Wonderful "comparison" of sorts, great rhyming, fabulous flow... I loved it.

  • 16 years ago

    by Lovelon Rules

    Really sad, but beautiful. Sometimes the flow is a little off, but the meaning is so strong it stays really good. So beautiful, you're really talented!

  • 16 years ago

    by Romantic Lover

    This was really sad and yet really beautiful. Your "ever after" is definitely out there and he'll sweep you right off your feet.

    I thought this poem was really nicely written which flowed really well.