Such a sad write Chelz. But it's written beautifully and by one with a beautiful heart. There is also a powerful message within your words.

Mpmm,

"I'll never forgive myself; I'll always hate
That when you jumped I was second too late "

that got to me

O h my what a truly powerful poem. The words
"I'll never forgive myself
That when you jumped I was a second to late" Just leapt from the page with such impact. The whole poem really touched my heart. Very well written

I'm sick....not of your poem but the feeling it leaves after it is read....chilling....haunting Chels

Suicide is a horrible experience for so many families around the world, I dont think people who committ suicide have an understanding of the profound affect there actions have on those who knew and loved them. You know how I feel about this Chels, I think its gutless. Your poem, is just one of the many reasons I do...poor parents forever blame themselves and live with permanent guilt ...some people are fighting to live while others are wishing to die...

MARVELLOUS WRITE CHELLY!

Eirisa

Wow that was so deep and powerful and sad. a touching write. very well written xx