This is so sad, but Happy B-day! :)
this part is what i thought was so beautiful,So just take me God..Let me die
Let roses bloom where I lie
the rest was also gorgeous, thx so much for writing this poem so that people like me can read it,
luv gabriella

First off happy birthday to you...hope you have a great fun-filled day
secondly great poem you have a great talent for showing your emotions in your work and geting it across to the readers
5/5
take care

Aww hunni, that was sooo sweet and sad. its very well written. i care x x x x x x x x x