Comments : Your Name...

  • 10 years ago

    by Princess Love

    What a sweet loving poetry. Only you can play with such simple concepts like 'your name' and create such an outstanding poetry. Loved the concept and the work.

    Best Wishes
    Michelle

  • 10 years ago

    by dora

    Hey great poem. beautifully worded. great job. xx

  • 10 years ago

    by Cindy

    Robert
    I love reading your poems they bring smiles to my face.

    Your Name, so it may whisper, in my mind, bringing me serenity,
    So that it may sing to me, like a lullaby, when I lay down to sleep.

    Loved these lines.
    Take Care Cindy

  • 10 years ago

    by Cuddles

    There's always something about a name. Excellently put!

  • 10 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    Robert,

    I have not read your poems in a long time, too long! Reading them always puts a smile on my face, this one was an exceptional write.

    Should try this poem is real life, I'm sure you will get equally exceptional results.

    Regards,

    Steven

  • 9 years ago

    by Steph

    I love this!! Amazing as always!

  • 8 years ago

    by kelleyana

    "Might I have your name, my dear, for your Soul, I wish, to woo.
    Your Heart, I wish, to capture. I want to thrill, every part of you.
    But I need to know your name, to properly show you adoration.
    I need to know what to call you, when I express my admiration.
    I'd like to know all about, your birthday and birth date too,
    So when that time comes around again, I can properly adorn you."
    I really like this poem.I think so many of us can relates to it, especially myself. Love it, kel.

  • 6 years ago

    by Meme

    Sweeeeeet ^_-

    just the type of poems I like to read ..

    Great job ..

  • 6 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    I understand the feeling behind these words, the need to make life more beautiful by loving and wooing a woman to the extent that you do. If only more men would see things this way, life could be so beautiful:)

    Well done,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 5 years ago

    by Burning Angel

    This is an amazing poem

  • 5 years ago

    by Khalid

    Great flow! Nicely built!