Comments : Runaway

  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle

    That was a very good poem. Good job. I thought there could be a bit more rhyming though. I didn't catch the rhymes until the last lines. But great job on the theme. =)

  • 17 years ago

    by Dana

    It's like a scene right out of a movie, beautiful! You captured the simple gestures of love that many take for granted. This poem just flowed flawlessly and would make an excellent country song :) Well done 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by BrokenREALiTy

    All the smiles you brought to my face;
    They've never left my beating heart.

    I love those two lines .
    It just really stood out to me . Well done on this poem . Nice rhymes & it`s like a scene taken right out of a moviee! But I loved it (:
    ..__MiNDYY

  • 17 years ago

    by MyDevotion

    WoW its definatly a very beautiful poem! i greatly enjoyed it! i love the fact at how your sort of telling a story and it definately flows nicely because of that fact! keep up the good work! 5/5!

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    Awww I love this!! I've been there before maybe that's why I loved it so much! The flow was amazing nice job! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    So sweet and touching,expression and wording is strong
    Well done
    PS:I was trying to read your profile but your profile write is somewhere disappears,i mean press enter a little times to make it fit the place,i hope this would be helpful for you
    Keep it up hun
    See ya
    Laura

  • 17 years ago

    by Gemmie Lou

    Very sweet poem there is lots of emotion in it and i always think that makes a poem better teh stanza's were really well set out as well xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Kristina

    Excellent job on writing this! i absolutely love it! it was very well written. you did a wonderful job on it 5/5

    ~Kristina

  • 17 years ago

    by LithiumSacrifice

    Aaawwwweee 5/5 for sure! that poem was EXCELLENT! sooo wonderful. this is byfar the best poem i have read on the site. i love it. *adds to favs*

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni

    Wow! this was so sweet! i loved it, your descriptions were perfect in this poem! completely perfect! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by BrixGoesxRawr

    Hunny.. This was absolutley amazing. It was so beautiful & the imagery was just.. WOO. breathtaking, really. It flowed so well & the rhymes were good. Nothing seemed to be at all forced. The detail & description in this.. is absolutley wonderful.

    You said, "Baby, lets runaway from here;
    Take my hand and we'll run together.
    We'll run to a place were we can only love;
    A place where things will always get better."

    ^ This really hit home hard.. I loved it. Sounds very familiar to me.. Brought tears to my eyes. I loved it.. So much.

    Beautifully penned, dear.

    Bri [x]

  • 17 years ago

    by Andrew

    This poem is really good. i like it alot!

  • 17 years ago

    by Curry

    Awhh this poem is sweet<3 i love it. great job! i gave it a 5/5.