Perfect Bliss(Triolet)

by Tricky Daze   Mar 8, 2007


My love for you is endless
I'm surrendered by your charms
I did nothing to deserve this
My love for you is endless
Life seems nothing that harms
I'm awarded by perfect bliss
My love for you is endless
I'm surrendered by your charms

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  • 16 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    Excellent triolet. I like this type of poetry. I think I wrote one of those before, but this was better than mine hehe :p. But this poem was beautiful and I really enjoyed reading it.

    -Shannon <3

  • 16 years ago

    by Adelle

    Short and sweet this poem is truly very good I liked it alot

  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    A nicely written Triolet. Though tersely expressed, the descriptions certainly encompass so much.

    "I'm awarded by perfect bliss"

    To be in love is indeed wonderful; it makes you realize your true self within when you're ON it. So cute.

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    This is beautiful with good choice of words and beautiful lines. Well described what perfect bliss means. Great indeed

    tc
    Fsams

  • 16 years ago

    by Mr M

    At least you have a good outlook in your poems. Most of the love poems here belong in the sad category