Comments : Perfect Bliss(Triolet)

  • 12 years ago

    by Simple Sensation

    Hey, a great Triolet! I can never acctually wrote something that you have a pacific line rhyme with another and stuff. i dont think i cna, but they are really effective! The flow is brilliant in these types of poems, and rhyming was great! The emotion was really heartfelt and touching, thought truthfully im not really into love poems and cant write one to save my life! But this was a great read and keep writing! xx

  • 12 years ago

    by MyDevotion

    Wow its short but its very nice, i like it =) 5/5 good job on your work, your very talented!

  • 12 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Wow.
    A triolet - man, I stink at those. Lol. I tend to stick with the simple forms of poetry. It's all I've mastered.

    It was beautiful & so heartfelt. The flow was good & the emotions were very vivid. Amazing job, keep it up! 5/5

    Stephanie Lynn .+.

  • 12 years ago

    by Annabel

    I loved this poem. I could relate to it almost exactly. Great job ! 5/5 xxxx

  • 12 years ago

    by Idiosyncratic

    Wow. Really gives the impression of pure joy. I usually don't like this style of poetry, but I enjoyed reading this one. Creative, short, and to the point.
    Nice work! 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Romancing the Darker Side

    Great flow! 5/5.

  • 12 years ago

    by Civil Hatori

    Great poem! Lie all fo you others, I rally enjoyed this one. A nice flow and choice of words.

  • 12 years ago

    by Civil Hatori

    AH I cannot type. Sorry, that should have said:

    Great poem! Like all of your other poems, I really enjoyed this one. A nice flow and choice of words.

  • 12 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    I really liked this because you tried something different.
    & it was cute and I could relate.
    Well done, this was my favourite :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Espoirfailed

    I liked how you managed to stick to the structure but still keep it a good poem, it was really strong throughout, i can't describe why. i liked the use of repitition in this, very effective.

  • 11 years ago

    by The Sky is Falling

    Written very well. I loved it. 5/5
    Check mine out

  • 11 years ago

    by Mr M

    At least you have a good outlook in your poems. Most of the love poems here belong in the sad category

  • 11 years ago

    by Fsams

    This is beautiful with good choice of words and beautiful lines. Well described what perfect bliss means. Great indeed

    tc
    Fsams

  • 11 years ago

    by Debbie

    A nicely written Triolet. Though tersely expressed, the descriptions certainly encompass so much.

    "I'm awarded by perfect bliss"

    To be in love is indeed wonderful; it makes you realize your true self within when you're ON it. So cute.

  • 11 years ago

    by Adelle

    Short and sweet this poem is truly very good I liked it alot

  • 11 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    Excellent triolet. I like this type of poetry. I think I wrote one of those before, but this was better than mine hehe :p. But this poem was beautiful and I really enjoyed reading it.

    -Shannon <3