This is the best poem i have ever read! no lie!!!! i really really like it! you should post some more up if they are as good as this one!!!!!!

One word - AH-mazing

-DaddysLittlePrincess

This is such a great poem it keep up the good work it really got my attention and it almost made me cry

This is long, but amazing. love it. 5/5
~Never Been Happier~

Wow this is really really good!

I'm liking this poem and for it to be your first one as well. well done.
xx

He said *I have loved you since the day
That you stole my heart
I think of you all the time
Whenever we are apart

When someone says love
You're the first thing to my mind
I know that I love you
And loved you this whole time

^^omg! amazing!...this is your 1st poem on here, and lemme tell you its amazing!..i loved it!!..wow keep writing and ill keep reading...if i could i would give it a 10/10, but i cant so definitly 5/5 from me...and would you mind commenting some of my other poems...thanks and thansk for the comment!

Haha volleyball and soccer is cool!!..haha...i used to play volleyball, but i didnt have enough time haha..comment back!!!

So tell me more about yourself...like what else do you like to do?

Lol yeah i am lucky...and a plus is since i can drive and i have my own car, i can like pick him up or w.e...and my mom knows him soo well she'll let me like go anywhere w.him

Aww thats soo cute!!!!...yeah we kissed haha....but since ive known him and stuff it wasnt so ackward... todays our 5 day aniversary haha...whoo hoo!!...but yeah he kissed me i think the day after we went out? idk haha dont remember...haha...thats good you finihsed your projects..i almost pulled an all nighter but i finished in time haha..comment back!!

Wow that was AMAZING!!! that had so much depth and emotion. Your talented much so. 5/5

Wow. This poem truly touched me. I felt so emotional. And that never happens. Not like in a million years lol. I applaud you. =P

The flow was just so good. And I couldn't seem to take my eyes off of the screen. It took me a few seconds to realize that I was done reading the poem. Very well written. =) Keep it up. 5/5 xxoo

Samantha

Haha...umm well this is really weird to be saying this, but yes i would say that his 16 year old brother is cute.. he has long dirty blonde hair, greenish grey eyes, tan, and tall, and muscular...basically like shane but 1 year younger haha...hes like my brother too haha his name is eric...umm haha i would say that shane was a good kisser haha...what about wil? thats cool, that youre getting your hair cut, is it really long?

Haha 4 hours earlier? nicee... how old were you?...when i had my first kiss, it was w. this guy jonathan, and i really liked him, so in 5th grade we went out, and in 5th grade i gots my first kiss haha...but actually i did get kissed in 1st grade, but i dont really count that one.. haha... i hope you get a goodd haircut!! haha..comment back when you get home!

Haha thats funny... but aww thats good you like your haircut... i dont think that me and shane are going out tonight...bc he has lacrosse practice, and i have lacrosse, and softball tomorrow, so we prolly wont hang out until friday haha... oh well ill see him in school tomoorww hhaa comment backkk

Haha thats funny... but aww thats good you like your haircut... i dont think that me and shane are going out tonight...bc he has lacrosse practice, and i have lacrosse, and softball tomorrow, so we prolly wont hang out until friday haha... oh well ill see him in school tomoorww hhaa comment backkk

Just because she smiles all the time doesn't mean that she doesn't have a heart full of pain hidden behind it

^^thats soo cute!!!...i love it!!..commmenntt backkkk haha

Wow if this story's true and it actually worked out for you guys that's amazing!! but even if it didn't the poems great. loved it

Yes we just chilled haha.. not much happened.. maybe a kiss here and there haha... but yeah youre lucky, junior yr @ my school is really tough haha