Comments : Story of love

  • 10 years ago

    by nicole

    This is the best poem i have ever read! no lie!!!! i really really like it! you should post some more up if they are as good as this one!!!!!!

  • 10 years ago

    by DaddysLittlePrincess

    One word - AH-mazing

    -DaddysLittlePrincess

  • 10 years ago

    by Lil One

    This is such a great poem it keep up the good work it really got my attention and it almost made me cry

  • 10 years ago

    by Bittersweet Sundown

    This is long, but amazing. love it. 5/5
    ~Never Been Happier~

  • 10 years ago

    by natalie

    Wow this is really really good!

  • 10 years ago

    by XfromwithinX

    I'm liking this poem and for it to be your first one as well. well done.
    xx

  • 10 years ago

    by Sara

    He said *I have loved you since the day
    That you stole my heart
    I think of you all the time
    Whenever we are apart

    When someone says love
    You're the first thing to my mind
    I know that I love you
    And loved you this whole time

    ^^omg! amazing!...this is your 1st poem on here, and lemme tell you its amazing!..i loved it!!..wow keep writing and ill keep reading...if i could i would give it a 10/10, but i cant so definitly 5/5 from me...and would you mind commenting some of my other poems...thanks and thansk for the comment!

  • 10 years ago

    by Sara

    Haha volleyball and soccer is cool!!..haha...i used to play volleyball, but i didnt have enough time haha..comment back!!!

  • 10 years ago

    by Sara

    So tell me more about yourself...like what else do you like to do?

  • 10 years ago

    by Sara

    Lol yeah i am lucky...and a plus is since i can drive and i have my own car, i can like pick him up or w.e...and my mom knows him soo well she'll let me like go anywhere w.him

  • 10 years ago

    by Sara

    Aww thats soo cute!!!!...yeah we kissed haha....but since ive known him and stuff it wasnt so ackward... todays our 5 day aniversary haha...whoo hoo!!...but yeah he kissed me i think the day after we went out? idk haha dont remember...haha...thats good you finihsed your projects..i almost pulled an all nighter but i finished in time haha..comment back!!

  • Wow that was AMAZING!!! that had so much depth and emotion. Your talented much so. 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by twisted reality

    Wow. This poem truly touched me. I felt so emotional. And that never happens. Not like in a million years lol. I applaud you. =P

    The flow was just so good. And I couldn't seem to take my eyes off of the screen. It took me a few seconds to realize that I was done reading the poem. Very well written. =) Keep it up. 5/5 xxoo

    Samantha

  • 10 years ago

    by Sara

    Haha...umm well this is really weird to be saying this, but yes i would say that his 16 year old brother is cute.. he has long dirty blonde hair, greenish grey eyes, tan, and tall, and muscular...basically like shane but 1 year younger haha...hes like my brother too haha his name is eric...umm haha i would say that shane was a good kisser haha...what about wil? thats cool, that youre getting your hair cut, is it really long?

  • 10 years ago

    by Sara

    Haha 4 hours earlier? nicee... how old were you?...when i had my first kiss, it was w. this guy jonathan, and i really liked him, so in 5th grade we went out, and in 5th grade i gots my first kiss haha...but actually i did get kissed in 1st grade, but i dont really count that one.. haha... i hope you get a goodd haircut!! haha..comment back when you get home!

  • 10 years ago

    by Sara

    Haha thats funny... but aww thats good you like your haircut... i dont think that me and shane are going out tonight...bc he has lacrosse practice, and i have lacrosse, and softball tomorrow, so we prolly wont hang out until friday haha... oh well ill see him in school tomoorww hhaa comment backkk

  • 10 years ago

    by Sara

    Haha thats funny... but aww thats good you like your haircut... i dont think that me and shane are going out tonight...bc he has lacrosse practice, and i have lacrosse, and softball tomorrow, so we prolly wont hang out until friday haha... oh well ill see him in school tomoorww hhaa comment backkk

  • 10 years ago

    by Sara

    Just because she smiles all the time doesn't mean that she doesn't have a heart full of pain hidden behind it

    ^^thats soo cute!!!...i love it!!..commmenntt backkkk haha

  • 10 years ago

    by Viola

    Wow if this story's true and it actually worked out for you guys that's amazing!! but even if it didn't the poems great. loved it

  • 10 years ago

    by Sara

    Yes we just chilled haha.. not much happened.. maybe a kiss here and there haha... but yeah youre lucky, junior yr @ my school is really tough haha