Comments : Story of love

  • 16 years ago

    by Curry

    To be your first poem,it was wonderful.
    i really enjoyed reading it and i gave it a 5/5.
    good work!

  • 16 years ago

    by Im not broken anymore

    GREAT!!!---

  • 16 years ago

    by The Pessimistic Peabody

    5/5 this poem was long but interesting, I'm not into love poems but it caught my eye and I'm very glad it did. Good expression throughout. keep up the good work

  • 16 years ago

    by uwouldntno

    OMG YOU ARE SERIOUSLY THE BEST WRITER...your poems are great...never stop writing these are beautiful

    sincerly yours,

    uwouldntno

  • 16 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Aww.. this poem is soo cute.. i like it bounced back and forth between mixed feelings.. at timers again i noticed that it dragged on a bit but still the flow was really nice which made for an ejoyable read and the word choice was grreat in describing everything you felt.. keep up the great work :D

  • 16 years ago

    by Dan

    Love the poem and it has great flow you really need to write more. well you have but you should write more and more now

  • 16 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    I like how you rhyme with ease, however, what I said in my comment on "Forever Gone" applies to this one, too.

    The way you write actually reminds me of some poetry I wrote a few years back. It brings back the memories, haha.

    Good job.

  • 16 years ago

    by BREEawNUHH

    Wow. This was amazing. You're a wonderful writer.

    5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by nikki

    Wow, now that was long. i liked the poem, the structure with the stanza's are great, it makes it easier to keep track of where you are, it was nicely penned, 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by dreamer88

    I cant believe this is your first poem!
    it made me want to cry! it so great! well done!
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by JEFF

    A little long but great read.