The luckiest girl on earth

by in.need.of.a.lucky.charm   Mar 9, 2007


She has demons inside,
The cruel wicked kind,
She is wild within,
And she is far from refined.

She can't be loved,
To that - she is opposed,
She won't let you in,
For fear of being exposed.

She's one of those girls,
Who wallows in disgrace,
She acts careless,
But it's just to save face.

She cries at night,
Matching tears with scars,
She's wishing silently,
To all the shooting stars.

But

He pulls her up,
As she beats herself down,
He would absorb all the water,
So she cannot drown.

He takes the abuse,
And watches her break,
He hides the blades,
For both his and her sake.

He lays with wide eyes,
Just to watch her sleep,
He wants to be awake,
When her nightmares start to creep.

He loves her completely,
Soaking in every drop,
He waits patiently,
For her heartache to stop.

Despite all her flaws,
He ignites her self worth,
Deep inside she knows..
She must be..
The luckiest girl on earth.

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  • 17 years ago

    by MaSkEdSoUl

    Awww this is sssooo cute, I love this poem, I like how you put the first part of the poem about how she is and the second about what he does for her!!

    "He pulls her up,
    As she beats herself down,
    He would absorb all the water,
    So she cannot drown."

    ^^my favorite part!! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Kayla

    ARRGGHHH ur poems are so awesome they are like written soo good
    u must have a guy who is really devoted to you congrats !
    luv Ka[ii].la

  • 17 years ago

    by Giovanni

    Oh my god. That was so sweet and I love the rhyming. Wow, you really are the luckiest girl on earth...

  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle

    I love this. I love the shift in the middle and the way you describe pure love and devotion. There's nothing that portrays that better than someone sticking around through the absolute worst.

    i especially loved the lines, "She can't be loved,
    To that - she is opposed,
    She won't let you in,
    For fear of being exposed."

    i can definitely relate. I also loved the last stanza. Well done

  • 17 years ago

    by tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup

    Wow this is amazing, i know what its like to have that, but i also know what its like to loose that, great poem and very well written, keep it up,
    nessa

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