Wow, your poem is really interesting. It matches with the way my ex love and I were. Keep it up because you are a really good poet...

Wow this is amazing, i know what its like to have that, but i also know what its like to loose that, great poem and very well written, keep it up,
nessa

I love this. I love the shift in the middle and the way you describe pure love and devotion. There's nothing that portrays that better than someone sticking around through the absolute worst.

i especially loved the lines, "She can't be loved,
To that - she is opposed,
She won't let you in,
For fear of being exposed."

i can definitely relate. I also loved the last stanza. Well done

Oh my god. That was so sweet and I love the rhyming. Wow, you really are the luckiest girl on earth...

ARRGGHHH ur poems are so awesome they are like written soo good
u must have a guy who is really devoted to you congrats !
luv Ka[ii].la

Awww this is sssooo cute, I love this poem, I like how you put the first part of the poem about how she is and the second about what he does for her!!

"He pulls her up,
As she beats herself down,
He would absorb all the water,
So she cannot drown."

^^my favorite part!! 5/5