I loved this! I loved every verse, each as intruging as the next. the words you chose were great, and the use of Satan-like things was brilliant. well done
Much Love And Many Kisses, Bex.

This was a much better poem. The rhymes were great, and the flow was well done. I liked the imagery in this poem. I skimmed through the poems previous to this, your love poems. They were too repetitve, so I didn't bother commenting.