Wow.. i lyk ur poem.. 5/5 ;)

That was Amazing lol I LOVE IT ,i just startid this poems thing i hope to get as good as you
but if you have time come see my 1st poems ever : D

I like it very much.

Gosh.. amazing.. lost 4 words almost.. =]]
5/5
take care
.x

Somewhat inspiring possibly : ]] Makes me reflect on my friendships. It was very good. Nice work : ]

Now this i think is the best so far
it's rhyming is fantastic the stanzas actually mean something and i can read it easily they aren't long stanzas the only thing that could make it any better is if it was longer
a well earnt 5/5 for shear brilliance

Um dont know what to say about this poem I cant not find anything that would make this poem bad in fact everything seams to be very good I just dident like it i'm sorry I know this probably dosent make much sense the was just something about this poem it dident do anything for me.

Good poem. Didn't really like the ending but the rest of the poem was good. Imagery was amazing in this poem. I loved the descriptions. 4/5

-Shannon <3

Wow. it was good, it was quite different, i liked the story behind it though, it sounded personal. nice job, 5/5

Wow. i think that the last line did wonders for the poem... they flow was pretty good... i enjoyed it allot

keep writing

I really liked this..I could feel the emotion and rage you had built up and had ready to release..The metaphors were definitely there again. Good job..another great piece.

Loved your poem
Laura keep it up
I like the line
Lightning acting as a light in dark
Gr8 imagination
5/5
your never to be forgotten friend
Rohan

Excellent!

Im ready, i love the entire piece it show a powerful determination, hope and will for doing what you want! this poem is great! well penned with such thoughts!

keep it up!

That was so dark and awsome i thought this 1 really expressed your rage well.= )

Cory

Umm wow what an odd poem but great in its own little deep way 5/5 not like you need it or anything HAHA Great poem

Noelle Wright

"But now I'm strong enough to be insane"....how I love these lines. i can totally relate!!! Wonderful job for this!!! Thanks for penning such poem. God bless you!!!

-Pink Butterfly-