This one if my favorite so far out of all your poems!!!!

Love it!

This is soo good!!..i loved it!!..and its so cool to have a good friend on this site too...i have one and its awesome!...keep up the good work!..and would you mind commenting some of my poems? thanks!

xoxoxSarrr

I like it, but on the last stanza...I got a bit confused. He already asked you to forgive and forget, right? That means he already said sorry and asked for forgiveness. Still a great poem. Thanks.

For one of your first poems its really good. It started out sad but then did a fip and went angry. Emotion in it was great. Nice rhyming words. Overall It was great. Nice job :]