Funeral bill

by crystaljean88   Mar 10, 2007


You know you have the keys to my heart,
You told me you would be true to me from the very start.

You told me how much you loved me,
You said i was the one person who always made you happy.

You were at one point the man of my dreams,
You now make me feel like your ripping me apart from the seems.

If the words you said to me was so true then why do i feel this way?
My emotions to you i hate to say.

I know i love you and always will,
But if you hurt me again, you will be paying a funeral bill.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Michelle

    Hey gurl thats what guys do dont let it get down i still love u and always will. if ya ever need me u know how to get a hold of me. i love u gurl.

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    This one was good...beautiful poem..it flowed well..n i think u deserve a 5/5 for this good wrk!
    xxPoojaxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Robert

    I have read over three pieces and have concluded that of you were to be writing to some one only your work would hold alot of merrit but as for writing for the general public I think your lacking a great deal. Your work has some good rythming schemes but I think your too young of a writer to put your true talents in focus. Youth is as they say is wasted on the youth but. I think if you got older and kept these pieces you would realize where I am coming from. Please Keep Writing but explore the different ways of expessing the ideas you wish to convey. This will make your work hold alot more power and direct that passion in the right way Plot121.

  • 16 years ago

    by ImNotPerfect20

    This was good. I know how you feel! they are annoying lol. anyway they poem flowed and rhymed pretty good. please keep up the great work. 5/5

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