Oh sweetie. This was such an amazing poem, I'm really sorry for your loss (Or so I read in your request for a comment)...This poem made me all teary eyed because it was so naturally sweet, and even though I didn't lose my father I lost him at heart...he is non-existant to me and reading this brought back all the vivid memories of joys that a father and his daughter could have. I wish you the best of luck, this was an amazing piece and I look forward to reading more of your poems. Keep it up hun! 5/5

Such a sweet poem. Sweet but sad. I love teh lines:
A daughter needs her daddy so she knows
What its like to be someone's favorite

Nice work
KITTY