Comments : Magical kiss

  • 11 years ago

    by Lyndsay Kalyta

    This is really cute:)

  • 11 years ago

    by rebeccaxX

    Awesome..ur one of my fav writers on here

  • 11 years ago

    by Jenie

    Wow this was awsome!!
    i could picture it like a love scene in the movies
    great work baby!

  • 11 years ago

    by Aaron Deevers

    Very nice, was getting into the moment there for a second. 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Dance Girlie

    That is ahdorable :]

  • 11 years ago

    by Breeeezie

    Omg this is soooo beautiful!!!!! makes me want to cry.. it took my breathe away!!!!

  • 11 years ago

    by Sara

    Looking in her eyes,
    the feelings a bliss,
    and every peck from her,
    is a magical kiss....

    aww soo cute! this is so much like my poem "sweetest kisses"... wow theyre a lot alike haha... great work! i liked this one too! 5/5 from mee

  • 11 years ago

    by janiL

    Nice.. Ü

  • 11 years ago

    by kitkat girl

    This is a really sweet poem. I like how you put the title in the ending line.

  • 11 years ago

    by jojo88

    Wow I love it 1000/1000

  • 11 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    It's sweet. Rhyming in some areas is off but the imagery made up for it. I'll give it a four.

  • 11 years ago

    by Kelsie

    I like this poem because i can totally relate to it. i know how it feels. this poem is beautiful. 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Kris


  • 10 years ago

    by needing a miracle

    Really good. i loved it! i liked this poem cuz it gives an idea on how guys feel when they're about to kiss someone they like. 5/5

  • I love this...really good 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by PJ

    Another Excellent Poem. I Love It

  • 10 years ago

    by Riffy

    Awww this is so beautiful!
    Made me smile :)
    Well done!!

  • 10 years ago

    by Jennifer Dziak


  • 10 years ago

    by Troubled Dreams

    Wow I really enjoyed this poem it flows so smoothly.

  • 9 years ago

    by Grace

    Ahhhhh sweet poem!! 5/5! =)