It's Fate

by Gasttlee   Mar 11, 2007


Destiny is fate
of capital weight
always kept straight
for we all relate.

Fate is special
and outright inevitable.

We all have a road
we raid like a code
in our own mode
waiting to load.

Everybody has a fortune
no one will ruin.

Destiny is ability
of flawless mobility
in all possibility
using proper utility.

When life's too heavy to sedate
always remember look inside your fate.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Fredy

    When lifeâ??s too heavy to sedate
    always remember look inside your fate.

    great poem, great work with the rhymes, and the ending: great message! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    Oh and remember to take our the ' in your poem.

    had to add that.

    i cant vote twice tho. but if i could i would give you another 5. still great poem

    David

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    Special and inevitable. two words i didn't even consider to use cause they would never rhyme. but they do.

    well done. ill comment some more now!

    5/5 David

  • 17 years ago

    by Sara

    That was amazing!!!!!!! i loved the way every verse rhymed! wow that was soo great and i can only wish to write poems that are as great as yours!!...5/5...thanks for the comment btw...comment back?!