That was amazing!!!!!!! i loved the way every verse rhymed! wow that was soo great and i can only wish to write poems that are as great as yours!!...5/5...thanks for the comment btw...comment back?!

Special and inevitable. two words i didn't even consider to use cause they would never rhyme. but they do.

well done. ill comment some more now!

5/5 David

Oh and remember to take our the ' in your poem.

had to add that.

i cant vote twice tho. but if i could i would give you another 5. still great poem

David

When lifeâ??s too heavy to sedate
always remember look inside your fate.

great poem, great work with the rhymes, and the ending: great message! 5/5