Stephen, I liked this a lot. The whole poem had a really nice flow and it told a beautiful story, sad, of unfortunately what can occur often in relationships. That initial rush fades out and either it blooms to more or just crashes and burns. Well done-
GOD DAMMIT! I accidentally clicked 4! :( its a 5/5. i like this. its that lust isnt the same as love. and sometimes our crushes or what we think we really want, should stay at that. because we may not end up liking it when we find its true self..
Lol, it's okay, I have no care in the world for ratings. The comment is what I really look forward to :P I've mis-clicked a 4 once too, on one of Poetess' poems, so I know exactly how you're feeling! I do like this one, though it at times is a bit clunky I'd say. Better than most of my 2007 poems!