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  • 10 years ago

    by Treal

    I loved it and it was not too long

  • 10 years ago

    by malina

    It wasnt too long....i loved it...big fan of yours...waiting for more^_^

  • 10 years ago

    by XxFallenxFromxGracexX

    Aww this poem had me in tears!! its so sad but true!! i loved it 5/5
    Luv FallenxFromxGrace

  • 10 years ago

    by Yasmin

    Wow! i really like your poem! it's really good!!!! I know how that girl feels like... hehe well except the fact that that guy in my life is still alive but he doesnt love me back... so yeah, i guess we're even. =)
    Im boring you... sorry
    i just wanted to tell you how great your poem is!!! =)

  • 10 years ago

    by Mandy

    Hey!!! i luv tht poem!! its sooo suh weet!!! i cried...well not really!! well ily!! can't wait to see you!! keep writing till your hand falls off...okay tht was stupid!! but keep it up!

  • 10 years ago

    by twisted reality

    Hmm...You just seem to get me on almost every one of your poems. Actually, I am finding it amazing lol. I don't usually like many poems from the same author. Only because sometime they have a good day, and sometimes a bad. It changes with everyone. But you seem to hold my attention throughout all of your poems.

    There was very deep and sad emotion in this poem, and I loved it. It gave a me a feeling that you know what you're talking about. Very well done. =) 5/5 xoxo

    Samantha

  • 10 years ago

    by Romancing the Darker Side

    Work on the capitilization, but other than that, it is a very nice story.

  • 10 years ago

    by isabel

    Absolutely wonderful...
    keep on writing...

    *isabel*

  • 10 years ago

    by Brittany Ottmo

    Man i really love this poem...it is deep and secret....keep writting more and i will comment more later....5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Sara

    Day by day
    their talks grew longer
    minute by minute
    their love grew stronger
    ...

    if you love someone
    don't make them wait
    tell them you love them
    before its too late

    ^^my favorite parts.. kinda sounds like someone who i know coughhh **jason** cough haha... but yeah 5/5 and ill ttul... great job again!!

  • 10 years ago

    by Daisha

    That is a great poem. It sounds a lot like my friend and me. You are a very talented writer, keep up the good work! =]

  • 10 years ago

    by Sydney

    *Sigh** oh my gosh that was amazing. I loved it. My heart flipped when he died. gave me such a wave of emotion, which is a good thing. absolutly amazing! i gave it a 5
    ~Sid~

  • 10 years ago

    by Viola

    Aww this poem really brings out a great message..and it's very touching and truthful..i absolutely love it !! Good Job =]

  • 10 years ago

    by Im not broken anymore

    OMG!! This is very good.. Its so sad if that happened im so sorry but this is amazing! I love it! 5/5.... Keep it up you got mad talent..

  • 10 years ago

    by Brittany

    This is really well written and i can feel the emotion you put into it, its really good! :)

  • 10 years ago

    by Lets Keep it A Surprise

    Oh My God..I loved it...it nearly made me cry. Well not literally but i felt my throat choke up lol

  • 10 years ago

    by OuR oWn BrAt PaCk

    I really love this poem i was on the verge of tears at the end this was very well writtin.

  • 10 years ago

    by uwouldntno

    I am speachless...this is a beautiful poem...don't EVER quit writing YOU ARE TERRFIC

    sincerely yours,

    uwouldntno

  • 10 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    It was so cool..but i will help you with some points to make it perfect
    First hun.please don't forget to capitalize the begining letters
    And second hun..the puncuation hun..especially shes-She's

    Other than that
    It was awesome
    Keep it up
    Laura

  • 10 years ago

    by N M Lambert

    Such a good msg to get across and a really well written poem x