Comments : Mixed Up

  • 10 years ago

    by LithiumSacrifice

    5/5 wow. what a very creative thing to do. =] and it came together so nicely. well done!

  • 10 years ago

    by Jenni

    I liked this! I thought it was really unique! once my sister did something like that, except she did it with my poems! haha! Great poem! 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    Creative and I love it! 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by LOVEcanHEALorKILL

    Good. Very good.
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    Thanks for commenting mine. I never thought about rhyming very much. Just what I feel & putting down on paper in poetry. Well thanks.
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    Very good poem. Dark poetry rocks, doesn't it!

  • 10 years ago

    by Tahniya

    This is a very unique poem! i really liked it!
    keep up the great work
    :)

  • 10 years ago

    by Tahniya

    This is a very unique poem! i really liked it!
    keep up the great work
    :)

  • 10 years ago

    by mnemosyne

    Hum, a very interesting and raw piece. I really enjoyed the style and atmosphere this had. There were a few spelling errors, "threw" needing to be "through" etc, which really pulls me out of the piece and makes me think about technicalities. Once cleaned up nice and spiffy though, this piece is a definite wonderful read.

    Take Care,
    Smiles,
    *N

  • 10 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Nice write, the flow was good as well as the structure, keep up the good work.

    Peace, Joe

  • 10 years ago

    by Kalee

    This is a very creative way to write a poem. It worked very well. This is a great poem. 5/5

    Kalee

  • And yet, another beautiful poem. The words in this were inspiring. Although, you should try fixing thr first stanza, make it look like the other stanzas. Great poem though.

    .:CiNdY:.