Good. Very good.
Thanks for commenting mine. I never thought about rhyming very much. Just what I feel & putting down on paper in poetry. Well thanks.
Very good poem. Dark poetry rocks, doesn't it!
Hum, a very interesting and raw piece. I really enjoyed the style and atmosphere this had. There were a few spelling errors, "threw" needing to be "through" etc, which really pulls me out of the piece and makes me think about technicalities. Once cleaned up nice and spiffy though, this piece is a definite wonderful read.