Comments : You remind me...

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    "You remind me of the sunrise,
    all the beauty and the splender.
    The beginning of forever,
    and the life we'll share together"

    My fave stanza. That whole poem was so gorgeous.
    I'm very happy for you
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by chavii

    Beautiful, such lovely expressions.Very well written,the way you compared nature to reflect your feeling is amazing.