Comments : No Going Back To Yesterdays

  • 10 years ago

    by Romantic Lover

    Wow, that was so sad and yet beautiful. Thanks for your comment, it was hard to write.

  • 10 years ago

    by Nick who Plays Pool

    5/5 and keep up the good work.

  • 10 years ago

    by brittany

    Wow!!! i love it im going through that right now with my ex bf its hard moving on great poem 5/5

    thanx for commenting mine
    *brittany*

  • 10 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    Really sweet and touching,i especially liked those

    why can't I be Selfish just this time?
    why can't I try my best to make you mine?

    And i have a advice it would be perfect if you make it all stanzas,but it is just a thought,good job
    Have a nice day
    Laura

  • 10 years ago

    by StormyStar

    I know how you feel.. and i love how you show it when you right, how much you love this someone.. i love your way with words..

  • 10 years ago

    by XXTruthSeekerXX

    Very true topic, great last stanza. Not as good as the first poem I read, it lacks originality as in being able to address something indirectly. Keep it up

  • 10 years ago

    by Alison

    This is absolutely beautiful, you have a wondreful talent. 5/5 keep it up, all of you poems are woderful =] - Alison

  • 10 years ago

    by Simple Sensation

    Hey, first of all thank you for your comment. :)
    Anyways a nice poem. Really touching. I liked how you used the alliteration of the "S" in the first line. This immediately catched my attention and drew me in. I liked the repition of "Why cant i be..." in the third stanza, it created great affect. You didnt have a real structure to the poem... but thats ok i still enjoyed it. Keep writing! xx

  • 10 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    This is good.... goot flow, good wording... its all together good, but could be better, 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Wow, it seem like you are saying this from me to the girl i love,lol.
    so true message,

    I know I can't make you love me if you just don't
    You can't make your heart feel something it just won't

    the best lines ever that just touched my heart with reality.

  • 10 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    "why can't I be Selfish just this time?
    why can't I try my best to make you mine?

    I know I can't make you love me if you just don't
    You can't make your heart feel something it just won't"

    Beautiful!!!...i love these lines the most!!...it's so touching n emotions r well penned in this 1!!.....excellent work!..Amazing write!
    kudos!!
    5/5!!

    xxPoojaxx

  • 10 years ago

    by CompletelyIncomplete

    So cute poem. The message in this poem is so true. 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Manar

    And if everything happens to go my way
    And all the colors in the world are different shades of Grey
    And I regret all what happened that day
    there will be no going back to yesterday

    i liked these lines veryyyyy much..u r so talented and unique in using words and expressing ur ideas..keep it up;)

  • 10 years ago

    by pookiengurgi

    Terrific...love it!It's really sad and hopeful that the person you love will do well in life and always be happy.Good job

  • 10 years ago

    by katie

    Wow that was wow