Battling the Heartache

by Jessica   Mar 14, 2007


Flashes of anger; cravings of pain
Ruby tears filled with lost memories
Shattered spirits mourning lifeless souls
Fighting till the end, she battles the heartache..

Flashes of anger; cravings of pain
Carving silently into a perfect existence
Cruelly tearing away pieces of a tender heart
Fighting till the end, she battles the heartache..

Flashes of anger; cravings of pain
Distorted love streams through bleeding veins
Ebony petals fall, revealing the crimson beneath
Fighting till the end, she battles the heartache..

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  • 16 years ago

    by Bug1219

    I love it i love it I LOVE IT!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittney Follett

    This poem is beautiful! I loved it how you repeated the first and last line, it kind of reminded me of a dream and repeating it added emphasis. You did a wonderful job on this one. You have an amazing vocabulary. Very strong and it only helps your poem. I usually favor rhyming but you pulled off impressing me without it. Great Write Darlin'! I loved this part the best:

    Flashes of anger; cravings of pain
    Distorted love streams through bleeding veins
    Ebony petals fall, revealing the crimson beneath
    Fighting till the end, she battles the heartache..

    Excellent

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Teria

    'Flashes of anger; cravings of pain
    Distorted love streams through bleeding veins
    Ebony petals fall, revealing the crimson beneath
    Fighting till the end, she battles the heartache.. '

    ^ That was exquisite.

    I loved it, a lot.
    The entire poem, it was perfectly penned, and the flow was amazing.

    It's easily related to, also.
    Which makes it ten times better.
    I loved it.

    Keep it up. :]

  • 16 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    This poem has so much emotion! i love it! i could almost feel the hatred! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    Wow....i was like... ???? at first but i got it in the end...u r like an awsome poet i'll give you a 5/5 and 5 stars lol just pretend their real lol *hands you stars* lol just done sing tht song by Paris Hilton..dont like her..not at all