Ok...what kind of person would give this poem a 4?! Lol. Ok you're deffinatly my favorite poet out of this entire site! Seriously, I don't read dark, sad, explicted ect poems but I sure do read yours. Anotehr great masterpeice! Keep up the great work!
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God Bless 5/5
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I love the description in this one. I like these kinds of poems anyways. Very nice work.

Your choice of words flowed so well. this was deff an amazing write; thank you for sharing it love. 5/5 def.

The descriptino thru out this poem was amazing. you kept the standards up. well done. bravo!

5/5 david

I really like the words you chose in this one. Seemed a bit short though because you repeated a lot of lines, but I did like the lines you repeated. Good job on this one hun!

Ahh, wonderful! The descriptions, once again, are so so vivid. You have a strong talent for enabling your readers to feel as though they are a part of your poem.

Great work. Keep it up.

Wow....i was like... ???? at first but i got it in the end...u r like an awsome poet i'll give you a 5/5 and 5 stars lol just pretend their real lol *hands you stars* lol just done sing tht song by Paris Hilton..dont like her..not at all

This poem has so much emotion! i love it! i could almost feel the hatred! 5/5

'Flashes of anger; cravings of pain
Distorted love streams through bleeding veins
Ebony petals fall, revealing the crimson beneath
Fighting till the end, she battles the heartache.. '

^ That was exquisite.

I loved it, a lot.
The entire poem, it was perfectly penned, and the flow was amazing.

It's easily related to, also.
Which makes it ten times better.
I loved it.

Keep it up. :]

This poem is beautiful! I loved it how you repeated the first and last line, it kind of reminded me of a dream and repeating it added emphasis. You did a wonderful job on this one. You have an amazing vocabulary. Very strong and it only helps your poem. I usually favor rhyming but you pulled off impressing me without it. Great Write Darlin'! I loved this part the best:

Flashes of anger; cravings of pain
Distorted love streams through bleeding veins
Ebony petals fall, revealing the crimson beneath
Fighting till the end, she battles the heartache..

Excellent

5/5

I love it i love it I LOVE IT!!