I liked it I thought it was cool the only thing I'd change was the repitition in the second stanza otherwise nice job

I couldn't do it. Have an arranged marriage.. I could never do it! Your family has lots of guts. :) This poem was beautifully written I only found one typo:

Whos that lovely girl thats got you wild.

who's* and thats it!

Amazing job darlin' I loved this part the best:

Beauty in your mind,
Beauty through your ears.
Who's that lovely girl,
Thats got you wild.

Great Write

5/5

Interesting poem right here glad you told us what it means at the bottom though or i never would of got it. I loved this though i found it to be really sweet a good poem right here. Well done ~mel

A very goow poem, I really enjoyed it, good work ad keep it up. Thanks for commenting on my poems.

Awh this is really cute. I love it. It's short and sweet and just a really great poem and well worht the read.

I wouldn't have gotten it either!!! lol...But it's a great poem and I believe I'll add you to my favorites!!!!!

Awww that's so sweet and kinda funny but that's just me ^_^ hehehe kudos!

Love the story behind it, i think it's romantic. great poem, i liked it. keep it up.