Wow--gud one@

It's a sweet write Gem. Not your deepest but definitely 100% heartfelt. I have quite a few like this myself. And I'm most proud of them not for their imagery or great rhyme, but because of the moment or feeling they are describing. I'm sure it's similar for you. Great job!
Charisma*

Gem
Nothing out of sync with true love :)
I loved reading your words.

It's something that takes over me
And fills my waking days
My love for you surprises me
In many different ways

Hope your days are always filled with wonderful surprises.
Love your friend Cindy

I can't tell you how much this relates to my life and the turmoil I'm going through. It's not out of sync.

Love is a powerful thing and can be overwhelming at times too.

I thought it was great! So true about taking a risk to love someone! You did a wonderful job! God Bless 5/5
<3Tayy

I love it...... Its great... I hope you write more I enjoy reading what you write your a wonderful poet......5/5

"There's a chance I could get hurt
A chance my heart could break
But when we feel a love like this
It's a risk we've gotta take ©"

That pretty much sums it up. Funny, sometimes, how even knowing the risk, you just leap in hopein against hope that this is the one that will last.

Well done, friend.

Always,
Jeannie

A touching poem. havent spoken in a while hope ur doin well =) xx

And when it comes to love i belive the risk is always worth taking :)
god you write such amazing things and every poem just gets better :)) 99/5

Just a very good all around write. nice flow and rhyme. 5/5 from me

Its a sweet heartwarming love poem .
Enjoyed reading it.

--chavii--

Really like what you have written here.....love is an adventure with risks.....

There's a chance I could get hurt
A chance my heart could break
But when we feel a love like this
It's a risk we've gotta take

Nicely put.....All the best, Debbie

I LOVE this poem!!! This is just so good! I can totally and completely relate, and that always touches me. Honestly, thank you for writing it! It was truly amazing...great job. 1,000,000/5 LOL! Well, you get the point :)
~Midnight Sun

Haha. boy do i know what this feels like =]
Great job on this one hun<3