Throughout the poem, i felt living emotion. very nicely written, but the most intresting part for me was the words (rare love) that is wha happen when we are in love,
greatly written and a 5/5 from me as you really deserve it.

This is how me and my ex were...we were together for a year and we broke up cuz he was dumb but then he came back and we were fine. so yeah i know what you mean...though now hes to egotistical haha.
but yes good
5/5

I like this poem.
Love your word choice.
5/5

~Chelsea

OoOoO I loved the words you chose it made the flow very nice and left me wanting to read it a lot more...I loved the way you chose to rhyme to it was very neat nice job 5/5

Wonderful poem. i felt so much emotion through your words, i love the thought of the poem. i enjoyed reading this. 5/5 keep up the good work 5/5

I liked this poem because the emotion of love was very strong throughout it. THe ending was great and the title of this poem caught my eye. This poem was nicely written kept me interested throughout it all. Well done ~mel

Beautiful poem...i loved it...it had so much of emotions through out..i loved the ending..just soo true when in love....i loved your choice of words n passion was filled through out..
Great work!
5/5!
xxPoojaxx

I don't read love poems often,(there are too many clishes in them) but this one's amazing... 5/5
I love the imagery you created.