Comments : Who I Am

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    "You think I'm a nobody but think again.
    If you don't like the way I can be, too bad.
    You can't change me, because it's who I am."

    I think a lot of people could do with taking heed of that last stanza.
    Well done sweets
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by BrixGoesxRawr

    Wow. Very nice. It flowed well, & was very.. honest. Lol. I liked the topic of this & how it was written. There are a few of the crazy symbol thingies. But you can't fix that cos of that stupid 'edit' button that's not working :]

    My life is crazy; my heart though is pure.
    I can be trustworthy; I can be a pain.
    But I'll never tell a secret that's for sure.

    You think I'm a nobody but think again.
    If you don't like the way I can be, too bad.
    You can't change me, because it's who I am.

    ^ I ABSOLUTLEY LOVEDDD THESE TWO STANZAS. So amazing. & The last stanza was PERFECT. I feel the same exact way! It's great. Everyone should think like this.

    Amazing write, darlin'.

    Bri [x]

  • 16 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    This is another real good poem, your poetry really reflects who you are which seems like a real genuine character, im glad to have read your poetry, i will read more when i havetime :D

    xxx alex xxx