Comments : The Murder

  • 17 years ago

    by Saravana Kumar S

    I think i know what you are talking abt there....Its really sad so much voilence happening around in our country...Problems everywhere...I think u have written this one pretty good...take care and keep smiling always...

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Nice job on this poem.

    Sun sets,humanity mourns.
    The evils has once again won.

    Loved your ending.
    Take Care Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    It's true at how many wrong convictions there are and how the evil in people can win..
    Excellent descriptions in such short sentences.
    Well done
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Damn, this was like a thriller movie or some novel....too dark but the reality of todays world picturaized in some fashion...great words indeed

    all the best and take care

  • 17 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Sad to think this sort of thing is going on.....well written in a few short lines.....to the point....

  • 17 years ago

    by Daniel J

    Short, sweet, and most likley - unfortunately - true.

  • 17 years ago

    by Jay jay

    Very nice poem keep writng