Love, this poem was amazing. but you shouldn't fret over lost love. where there is a will there is a way. i know you don't want to hear that but babe it's true. i lost a love that meant so much to me. i thought it was the end of the world. it took months; but when i finally realized that i had to live life and open my heart back up; things got better. so smile, love, things WILL get better if you let it. 5/5

Awww its so sad, your very good at expressing your feelings, i like your style of writing too xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

I can relate to this. I read your profile and it brought tears to my eyes. I am going through it to. I am in love with someone that doesn't love me. It hurts more than anything. and I ask myself everyday how can God just give me something so special and just take it away as if it was never yours. Love is confusing and love is very painful. I can't find anything good about love anymore. Ahh I'm sorry I'm just rambling on and on about this. Good poem...

Very nice. I like your rhyming flow. Not forced. And you also had many different words that I can't rhyme. Yet, I do expect a comment on one of my poems ;) Have a nice night!

Wow that was well good!!! yh i would give it a 5/5