From A life that used to be

by e LIZ a beth   Mar 18, 2007


Frozen tear drops cried in winter
mind set to panic mode
as chaos slowly fills her life
from this broken abode

old and dusty furniture
cobwebs fill the room
from a life that once was
with nothing left but a tomb

going trough old boxes
filled with heartache and with pain
remembering all the times
they'd sit on the porch in the rain

looking at the swimming pool
covered up with rustic leaves
wondering how he left
as her heart slowly bleeds

as the day comes to an end
the girl looks back to see
a broken, old, and empty home
from a life that used to be

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  • 16 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    Ah, so sad and so wonderful!
    Great poem. the flow once again
    was wonderful and the poem itself
    was flawless. Well done.
    God bless 5/5
    Thank you for the comments and rates!
    <3Tay^__^

  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    :D andiloveyou <3

  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    O yeah
    i LOVE this stanza

    Frozen tear drops cried in winter
    mind set to panic mode
    as chaos slowly fills her life
    from this broken abode

  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Love this poem.. great description :D

  • 17 years ago

    by Dean Russell-Rands

    I love this poem, I cant fault it in any way because I love it so much - excellent writing - you've got talent, loads of it. keep writing =)

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