Things i wont tell you

Not really very sure about this one. i think the ideology has been done to death. [ and badly at that ] i probably shouldn't use that as an excuse to berate your writing, but i'd have enjoyed this more had you of elaborated on the idea a little bit more, or created a concept. i suppose as a basic thought, this poem is pretty good, but unless it's for the purpose of a quick vent, i'm not enthralled. sorry.x

Nessa I love you!!!! This is a really cool poem. Sounds alot like me after adam and I broke up...

Aww this is sweet yet sad, the simplicity and innocence of it is really touching