Comments : Roses and switchblades

  • 17 years ago

    by Emmy

    Interesting i liked it cause it hits how i some times think exallent work

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    Well i liked it more than the member b4. i gave you a 5/5, like always. this poem was written perfectly.

    5/5 david

  • 17 years ago

    by SiLeNtLy ScReAmInG

    It's very dark but the way it was written is very good. I like it. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by fvalconbridge

    Wow, love the layout and and the rhyming of:

    white roses
    red rainfall
    no more poses
    no more crap from you Neanderthals

    the ending was great and that is one of the best poems i've ever read. 5/5 keep writing.

    x

  • 15 years ago

    by meganmarie

    Wow. i love this. deep, powerful, emotional and very good flow.

    Broken and battered
    torn and tattered
    blade rising
    time flying

    ^ love the opening. very powerful

    --aprilsconspiracy

  • 12 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Oh my, this poem is amazing. Emotion runs abound and it is so strong. Description and imagery take turns unfolding a short movie clip of this. Anyone reading this will be able to step in your shoes for a moment. I think that this piece is terrific and you have penned something absolutely amazing.