Journey Home

by Gem   Mar 20, 2007


I step on the bus and find a seat
I've missed the rush hour, what a treat
I get out my book and settle down
As the heavy wheels start to turn round

But almost as soon as we leave the station
I'm overcome with sheer frustration
I can hear a rap song start to blare
The ch av at the back just doesn't care

He turns his mobile on full volume
And plays his songs like in his room
He has no respect for anyone near
The smirk on his face makes that clear

But I, for one, won't stand for this
I stand up with an angry hiss
I march over to where he's sat
And ask him what he's playing at

"It's public transport, not a rave
Put on some headphones and try behave
Have some respect for the rest of us
Or take yourself right off this bus!"

Everyone around began to cheer
And the ch av looked almost close to tears
He quickly switched off his noisy phone
And everyone relaxed for the journey home ©

*Gem*

(Totally crap but i had to get it done in five minutes so whatever =)

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  • 17 years ago

    by X Kashies Misery X

    LOL THATS SO FUNNY!!! AND GOOD!!!
    i really really like it

  • 17 years ago

    by StarLightxInHisEyes

    Cool

  • 17 years ago

    by lisa

    Hahhahha wikkid loved it mate.well done x

  • 17 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    You did this in 5 mins....what will u do in 10 mins then...blow this site i guess.. :o))

    this is so superb...so easily flowed and a great message too...all in just 5 mins...u r simply great

    all the best and take care

  • 17 years ago

    by Krzysztof J

    Crap?! lol yeah whatever Gem!! lol made me laugh and kinda blush as i too am guilty of my ipod blazing away a torrent of noise from time to time :) none the less a beautifully funny poem :)) 5/5