Teeeheee sounds rather familiar this does, but it could help if they listened to some good tunes lol.
i liked it Gem for a 5 minute poem its good =] WoOp!
~*~Jen~*~

Gem
This brought a smile to me. Just thinking of you standing up to someone over a song is very funny :)
Take Care Love Cindy

We dont have a good poet but also a brave girl ,haha good write:D
Enjoyed it lot.

Take care
chavii.

Hahaha cute twist at the end. It was hilarious. Good to see you do a funny poem! Loved it Gem! Hahahaha...i love that you chose rap to get angry with cuz I don't like rap. hahaha nice!
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Charisma*

WoW, only 5 minutes, well you got to addmit, it's kinda funny, but i'm like young and don't know what a ch av is?? =S, reallly confusing, let alone trying to pronounce it..well nice to see you got your writing again =) 5/5

Haha. i loved it. amazing poetry gem. ive missed it =]
how have you been. its been a while. i added a new poem. lol. its been a while for that also =]
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Crap?! lol yeah whatever Gem!! lol made me laugh and kinda blush as i too am guilty of my ipod blazing away a torrent of noise from time to time :) none the less a beautifully funny poem :)) 5/5

You did this in 5 mins....what will u do in 10 mins then...blow this site i guess.. :o))

this is so superb...so easily flowed and a great message too...all in just 5 mins...u r simply great

all the best and take care

Hahhahha wikkid loved it mate.well done x

Cool

LOL THATS SO FUNNY!!! AND GOOD!!!
i really really like it