Not long and crappy, long and beautiful. It was great. I loved it. Was sad, until the very end, but its true, we do often fail...I'm used to it by now. I'm guessing that it is you and your freind your talking about, Take care not to let it fail, it breaks your heart if it does, trust me.
Another brilliant poem from you.
Wanna read more.
5/5
in 2 words grat job ;p
-Black night-

Awwww....thats so sweet. its a great story...the rhyming was off in some places but besides that it was great!

xo kisses xo