Comments : Wish That I Were

  • 17 years ago

    by Molly

    Cute, 5/5 for me!

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Debbylyn
    I am so glad you posted this. It is written with such beauty and love,

    Wish that I were time
    To give back what has passed
    To ask for all and nothing
    Just to be with you at last

    This stanza really touched my heart.
    Love you Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by Romantic Lover

    Oh that was so touching. A truly beautiful poem.
    I loved it.

  • 17 years ago

    by Barry

    A love so true and my only one…like the rain, snow, moon and golden sun
    I love you as this verse has to run…my deep and lonely one
    You are mine….like the stars that shine…forever till the end of time.....

    Barry...you are so beautiful

  • 17 years ago

    by Barry

    Debbie please ignore a?|
    words from by Pablo Neruda

    I love you without knowing how, or when, or from where.
    I love you straightforwardly, without complexities or pride;
    so I love you because I know no other way
    than this: where I does not exist, nor you,
    so close that your hand on my chest is my hand,
    so close that your eyes close as I fall asleep.

    YOU ARE SO BEAUTIFUL....

  • 17 years ago

    by chavii

    This poem is so beautiful and full of sweet tender love. Amazing write really touches ones heart.

  • 17 years ago

    by jolee

    Wow, i've probably never read a more amazing poem! i LOVED it
    you are a very very talented writer
    dont ever stop!

  • 17 years ago

    by Liz

    Wish that I were time
    To give back what has passed
    To ask for all and nothing
    Just to be with you at last.
    ___

    I love that stanza, amazing ending. Debbie, this poem is just beautiful. It touched my heart deeply and i can relate to it on so many levels. Brilliant piece. Never stop writing.

    ` Liz
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Beautifully penned. Impeccable rhythm and rhyme. Another 100/5!

  • 17 years ago

    by Corinne

    Beautiful

  • 17 years ago

    by Yazdan

    Simple but powerful poem. That is an amazing poem. Great work!

  • 17 years ago

    by Barry

    You are.......
    so beautiful......
    the poem leaves me with no words.

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    "Wish that I were time
    To give back what has passed"

    Thats amazing... how many times has my mind thought a variation of those words..
    Well done m'dear.
    This poem speaks great volumes
    5/5
    *gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by ben thompson

    Wow Debbie excellent job on this poem.

    Wish that I were the stars
    To light your darkest night
    To hold your heart inside me
    A beacon shining bright

    I know these feelings so well.
    All the best
    Ben

  • 17 years ago

    by Boy

    I have read all your poem. it is realy gr8 symbol of love. you show that how much you love to a special person. i loved your poem. that was the best poem whihc i read today. i wish someone wouldsay me these all words. which you wrote in your poem.. gr8 work 5/5 take care.

  • 17 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Wow Debbie, that was beautifully written, I loved it. The flow and the emotion within was outstanding, keep up the wonderful work.

    Peace, Joe

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    Well i also agree this is a very beautiful poem. the structure i thought was excellent!

    5/5 David

  • 17 years ago

    by Tom K

    Thank you for writing this sweet beautiful poem, I loved it. I identify so well with the thoughts of this poem. I will have to go back and read some more of your lovely writings. thank you.
    tom

  • 17 years ago

    by moonlil

    Wow, i am speechless. It is so beautiful and I just love it!

  • 17 years ago

    by Barry

    So close that your hand on my chest is my hand,
    so close that your eyes close as I fall asleep.

    YOU ARE SO BEAUTIFUL....