Sadness

by amoxi   Mar 23, 2007


Sadness is the color of black like the night sky
It sounds like a deserted;empty house
And tastes bitter to the sound of happiness
It smells lke a plant
It looks like a blck hole
It makes me feel uncomfortable

Sadness is the color of green with sickness
It sounds like me throwing up from being lonely
And tastes like the hunger for love
It smells like molded food
It looks like the sun turning black
It makes me feel terrible

Sadness is the color of blue like the sky i can't see
It sounds like the terrible sound of birds chirping
And tastes like the taste of terrible food
It smells like fresh cut grass
It looks like a dark basement with no light
It makes me feel lonely

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  • 16 years ago

    by Gem

    I liked the different ways you used to compare sadness and the way you contrasted the colours was excellent!!
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by Darien

    There was a lot of weird spelling mistakes in this poem, and you were sort of repetitive. The lines were kind of boring because of that. You started off a lot of lines with "It". You should use other words to describe 'sadness'

  • 17 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    Your descriptions of sadness are excellent. I agreed with everything that you said. This was a very nicely penned poem. Good work.

    5/5.

  • 17 years ago

    by Xx Eternal Fantasy xX

    I think this poem was great. Who ever downvoted it to a 1/5 is really jealous. I give it a 5/5 cuz I loved the way you described sadness. Wonderful way of expressing your feelings. Keep up the good work.

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