Wonderful job.. the emotion is strong and the flow is fantastic and made for an easy read great job 5/5!

Excellent. i liked it. and i agree with it 100%. good job =)

I really like it my friend, it was from the bottom of your heart. 'The best poems are the one from the heart' I also feel the same with you.. I can really relate to this poem.. If you need someone to talk to.. Just message me..

My First love broke up with me.. And it really hurts.. That's why I know how you feel..

Anyway Good job

Thiz is very touchin u really blessed

It's an interesting poem and nicely written.

The emotion is strong well written! and enjoyable to read

I love this!!!!!