Good one....Every line seem to have a special meaning pf pain towards love...take care and keep smiling always...

Chavii
Very deep emotion in this piece. Graet job!

One embrace of unconditional love,
life flickers back in her dead world.

I really liked this
Take Care Cindy

In my opinion, love can cure anything and you've shown that perfectly in this piece.
Excellent work m'dear.
Short and simple and so meaningful!
5/5
*gem*

Wow, Chavii, I really liked this.
Great job.

Such a sad write. my friend. It is a so telling poem. Short, but with those few words, you have dug yourself out of the depths of dispair by the last stanza.

Good job,

Always,
Jeannie

Wonderful what a new love can do for the broken heart...

One embrace of unconditional love,
life flickers back in her dead world.

Beautiful! 5/5 Debbie

Amazing & Beautiful.

It's astonishing what love can cure.... even things that hurt the most.

Wonderful poem & your words were chosen throughout the poem perfectly! Keep writing! 5/5

Stephanie Lynn .+.

It's fantastic... Wonderful poem... Very touching indeed!

I like your poem it is short and yet tells alot keep up the good work

It was nice I liked it

One embrace of unconditional love,
life flickers back in her dead world

This is just so amazing, couple of lines and they say so much...its just so deep.

I wonder what made this poem downvoted?

Keep writing dear
Sorry for being late in commenting.

all the best and take care

Amazing poem....beautiful and touching, flawless with great flow

inpiring and lovly

.-.-.-.-.lots of love.-.-.-.-.tara

Good Heavens. In all truth, Miss Chavii, I was literally rendered speechless in a split-second. This piece was SO beautiful for words to describe, and that's with a capital S and O! :) I really, really love it. Excellent work! Keep on writing what you feel and like. I hope you all the best and take care.

One word is all I got to say about it: stupendous. =]

Love,
Debbie